t3mp 2011-03-27 08:01:14

Nicely done, looking forward to what comes next.

Ninjkabat 2011-03-27 09:23:53

Ok, sorry, I'm going to be the bitch from Japan and say that you shouldn't use Japanese in your work until you learn a little of the language. 'Cause it's glaringly obvious you speak none of it.

Also, your sense of timing in the action sequence was pretty slow. The whole genre of kung-fu movies is exciting because the action sequences are just that: exciting. You kept shots for too long, made movements too slow, had reactions that seemed drunken at times; make the whole thing faster and it might feel like she's actually a badass.